Tuesday 5 February 2019

My Bio Poem

In class we have been writing Bio Poems. A Bio Poem is about someone, mine is an autobiography because I wrote it about myself.  A Biography is about someone else but you write it instead of them.



4 comments:

  1. Ryan you'll have to tell me about your fog machine, when or where do you use it? It would be great to have a pool at home in this weather, lucky the school pool is up and running though.
    Mrs Hahn

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  2. Hello Mrs Hahn
    Yes I agree we are very lucky to have school pool in this heat. I use my fog machine in the lounge and in the hallway. I use it at night time because it creates a great effect with my laser light show and disco ball. I could even use it for the Halloween disco it will make a spooky and eerie effect. Kind regards Ryan.

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  3. Hi Ryan, It's Miro. I like your Bio poem because you have pictures that are equivalent to the words and you follow all the rules of a Bio poem. Maybe you could make the slides move a bit faster.

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  4. Okay next time Miro I will make the slides move faster...VROOM. From Ryan

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