Hi there, my name is Cassie and I am a student in room manukau at waikowhai School. I really like the way you describe a all about me and you should describe more things . It made me think of the book your reading and I read Matilda . Have you thought about matilda . If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://mr riceman. blogspot.co.nz.
Hey Ryan How's it going! I absolutely love your post, it tells me so much about you and your interests. I like how you added detail to your sentences that made it really interesting. All of the headings were very eye catching as were the pictures. Next time to make your post stand out even more you could add brighter colours for the text boxes. I look forward to seeing more amazing posts from you.
Hi Ryan, I really like the way you have described yourself. I personally think it's good to get an 'About Me' on your blog, so people know a little bit about you. It reminds me about the beginning of one book I read, it sounds like your describing yourself as the character. I personally think you should add more specific information instead of saying 'I like to go mountain biking'. Overall a good post!
Hello Ryan it is Callum here and I am a student from room Manukau at Waikowhai Primary School I really like the way your were talking and describing yourself and I also like the way you said you love cats cause I love cats to.The thing I do not like is going camping because it is scary and there might be mosquitos. They really make me itchy.Even in that bush we have a bush at Waikowhai Primary School and so you have so many things on your blog it is so amazing. If you want to see my blog it is http://wpscallumt.blogspot.co.nz/ kind regards Callum
Hi Ryan it's Miro. I like your Google Drawing about yourself because you really describe what you like and what you do without saying too much personal things. Is the picture of a cat your cat?
Hi there, my name is Cassie and I am a student in room manukau at waikowhai School. I really like the way you describe a all about me and you should describe more things . It made me think of the book your reading and I read Matilda . Have you thought about matilda . If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://mr riceman. blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment. I have never read Matilda or seen the film and it sounds like it would be a good read. From Ryan at Awahono School.
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ReplyDeleteHow's it going!
I absolutely love your post, it tells me so much about you and your interests. I like how you added detail to your sentences that made it really interesting. All of the headings were very eye catching as were the pictures. Next time to make your post stand out even more you could add brighter colours for the text boxes. I look forward to seeing more amazing posts from you.
From Ella
Hi Ryan,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you have described yourself. I personally think it's good to get an 'About Me' on your blog, so people know a little bit about you. It reminds me about the beginning of one book I read, it sounds like your describing yourself as the character. I personally think you should add more specific information instead of saying 'I like to go mountain biking'. Overall a good post!
Kind Regards,
Noah
Hello Ryan it is Callum here and I am a student from room Manukau at Waikowhai Primary School I really like the way your were talking and describing yourself and I also like the way you said you love cats cause I love cats to.The thing I do not like is going camping because it is scary and there might be mosquitos. They really make me itchy.Even in that bush we have a bush at Waikowhai Primary School and so you have so many things on your blog it is so amazing. If you want to see my blog it is http://wpscallumt.blogspot.co.nz/ kind regards Callum
ReplyDeleteHi Ryan it's Miro. I like your Google Drawing about yourself because you really describe what you like and what you do without saying too much personal things. Is the picture of a cat your cat?
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