Tuesday, 23 January 2018

Letter to a friend

In our second activity for the Summer Learning Journey we had to write a  letter to a pretend friend. Here is my letter.
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  1. Allie CostelloThursday, January 25, 2018

    Hi Ryan

    Well done with writing you letter. You really do describe your feeling extremely well.
    It would be extremely scaring sailing across a huge ocean and not knowing where you were heading and what you would find when you got there.
    I really like the describing words that you use, foggy distance and throbbing headache.
    It really made me feel like I was there with you!

    Great work Ryan. Remember that you can leave a comment on another students blog and this will earn you extra points also.

    Keep up the great work Ryan

    Until next time

    Allie :)

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