In class we have been reading about Pompeii. Pompeii is a city in Italy and which had been covered up by lava from a mountain called Mount Vesuvius. I made a slideshow with a Screencastify with my friends Alex and Miro. We made the slideshow like a diary. Enjoy!
This story is a great collaborative effort from the three of you, and I like that you recorded yourselves reading it. You told us a lot about how the narrator felt in your story, which is great as it makes the reader more able to imagine what it must have been like.
ReplyDeleteSomething for next time: think the words "I felt" in your head and write the sentence without using those words, eg Water washed into the small boat. The cuts on my feet stung.