Hi Ryan, I like the way you introduced your poem so people know where the inspiration came from. Your voice is loud and clear when you are reading the poem. Maybe next time you could read with some more expression to give your audience a better understanding of the character you have written about.
Thank You for the comment. Next time I will try to add more expression to give my audience a good photo in their mind about what I am writing about. Kind Regards Ryan.
Hi Ryan, I like the way you introduced your poem so people know where the inspiration came from. Your voice is loud and clear when you are reading the poem. Maybe next time you could read with some more expression to give your audience a better understanding of the character you have written about.
ReplyDeleteThank You for the comment. Next time I will try to add more expression to give my audience a good photo in their mind about what I am writing about. Kind Regards Ryan.
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