We are learning to describe a setting and a character

In Room 5 we are learning to  describe a setting and a character in our writing. We each wrote our own description. Here is mine.

Snow on the Hill.

It was a cold and windy day. On the big straight frozen road there was a car slowly driving along. As the grey sad looking clouds very slowly lifted away, the trees  swayed from side to side.   You could hear the ice softly crackling then there was a different sound; they looked up and spotted the branches from the ash trees snapping and falling onto the car roof. There was not a single animal in sight. Oliver was playing on his i-pad in the back seat of the car. Oliver was wearing a blue scarf, green gloves, red gumboots, a blue jacket and black pants. He was feeling excited because he was going to play in the snow at the park that was about five minutes from his house.  When he got to the park he wanted to make a gigantic snowman that had sticks as arms.